My name is Mikey. I'm a part of the Summer Learning Journey team this year and I'll be commenting on some of your blog posts over the summer break. I'm so pleased that you've decided to take part in the programme this year.
You've created a beautiful, eye-catching profile poster here, Naomi. I really like the background colour. You've also included some great information but I did notice that some of the facts you've shared have been copied directly from another website. I understand that you would have used the internet to do some research but it's important that you put the information into your own words. Once the programme officially starts next week and we begin awarding points, we won't be able to give you full points if the work is not your own.
Hi Naomi!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikey. I'm a part of the Summer Learning Journey team this year and I'll be commenting on some of your blog posts over the summer break. I'm so pleased that you've decided to take part in the programme this year.
You've created a beautiful, eye-catching profile poster here, Naomi. I really like the background colour. You've also included some great information but I did notice that some of the facts you've shared have been copied directly from another website. I understand that you would have used the internet to do some research but it's important that you put the information into your own words. Once the programme officially starts next week and we begin awarding points, we won't be able to give you full points if the work is not your own.
Thanks Naomi!
Mā te wā,
Mikey :)